You wore something sweet, in white (Rewriting Eric Clapton)

Plain audacity - I rewrote Eric Clapton's 'You Look Wonderful Tonight' - the brickbats and the bouquets (hopefully) please -

So we got talking

It was a long moon night

You said its freezin

I said let’s hold on tight

And I could smell your

Sweat, and a bit of fright

And I remember

You wore something sweet, in white.

Times that go passing

You go your way, and I

Sometimes I miss you

Sometimes I wish you try

That’s when I find him

Shining in your sight

And I remember

You wore something sweet, in white.

As we grow old now

Aging hearts and aching feet

May be we do see

Faces one longed to meet

And it is so vexing

Can’t seem to place you right

But I remember

You wore something sweet, in white.

Yes, I remember

You wore something sweet, in white.

original song with lyrics